Threshold Page 13

30th Dec 2014, 4:36 AM in Threshold Comic
Threshold Page 13
Average Rating: 5 (9 votes)
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Vincethestick 30th Dec 2014, 4:36 AM edit delete
Vincethestick
Oh shit, Lucien bailed.

Sooooooooo...apologies for all the text but Lucien's a bit of a talker. The level adjustments were a bit screwy this time but I hope the text isn't too bad.

Anyway, this scene's got about a page left, and then I'll be introducing a couple new characters and moving on to the part I've been waiting to do: Vance's training and costume hunting!

Comments:

alston123 30th Dec 2014, 5:17 AM edit delete reply
alston123
I love how he's like I'm just gonna lean and chill on this wall with a knife sticking out of my belly. I wonder when he will realize that he can take it out. Oh, I wonder if he has fast healing abilities like Wolverine. ^_^
Vincethestick 3rd Jan 2015, 3:54 PM edit delete reply
Vincethestick
Fast healing,, indeed! I'm not sure if it's as powerful as Wolverine's, but he does save a lot of money on bandages!
Seabiscuit 30th Dec 2014, 6:36 AM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
Hahah! "Practical masochism."
I'm gonna miss Lucien! But it was pretty cool of him to at least stick around this long and explain things. I love how Vance /still/ hasn't bothered to take the knife out, haha.
New characters? Costume hunt? Hype!:D
(Oh, the text is perfectly fine and readable!)
Vincethestick 3rd Jan 2015, 4:00 PM edit delete reply
Vincethestick
Times like this I feel like Lucien's a sort of personified exposition device mixed in with a mysterious and stoic know-it-all...only, you know, not a total dick about it.

It would be funny if I just kept the knife in the whole time, but something tells me that would be incredibly inconvenient for him.
ProfEtheric 30th Dec 2014, 9:02 AM edit delete reply
ProfEtheric
The term "Blessed With Suck" comes to mind...

The text is fine (if a little small).

Great page, overall!
Vincethestick 3rd Jan 2015, 4:04 PM edit delete reply
Vincethestick
Could be worse, I guess, in regards to both comments. I know I write a lot sometimes but I didn't want to stretch this over two pages needlessly either.

At least he isn't that guy in Megamind who's weak to copper.
demcleod 30th Dec 2014, 9:26 AM edit delete reply
demcleod
I find his power pretty cool actually. Not many superheroes feel a surge of power after being stabbed. Unless you're Superman, a stab to the gut would most likely hurt.
Vincethestick 3rd Jan 2015, 4:07 PM edit delete reply
Vincethestick
I guess you could find a way to forge a Kryptonite sword or something, that'll show that smug tights-wearing boy scout!
machinehead 30th Dec 2014, 5:54 PM edit delete reply
machinehead
The pranks he could pull with his powers alone would make it all worth it.
Vincethestick 3rd Jan 2015, 4:11 PM edit delete reply
Vincethestick
Insurance fraud also comes to mind.
ChilPhil 30th Dec 2014, 5:56 PM edit delete reply
ChilPhil
To power up, he needs to get hurt, or hit someone and gets some energy from the recoils, interesting concept.
When I first saw the page, I thought, whoa a lot of text! But as I read the entire page, I understand it was a good idea to place all the explaination of his power on one page, so a reader doesn't have to flip pages.
Vincethestick 3rd Jan 2015, 4:14 PM edit delete reply
Vincethestick
To me there felt like a little too much for one page but not enough for two, especially when I already had the page breaks planned out. I had to compromise.
AvianTiger 4th Jan 2015, 1:09 AM edit delete reply
AvianTiger
I hope this isn't the last time we see Lucien, I was really warming up to him :<
BlueDragon 13th Dec 2019, 2:16 PM edit delete reply
BlueDragon
I really like the second and third panels. I like the way they look.

Nothing more to say than that XD