Sooooooooo...apologies for all the text but Lucien's a bit of a talker. The level adjustments were a bit screwy this time but I hope the text isn't too bad.
Anyway, this scene's got about a page left, and then I'll be introducing a couple new characters and moving on to the part I've been waiting to do: Vance's training and costume hunting!
I love how he's like I'm just gonna lean and chill on this wall with a knife sticking out of my belly. I wonder when he will realize that he can take it out. Oh, I wonder if he has fast healing abilities like Wolverine. ^_^
Hahah! "Practical masochism."
I'm gonna miss Lucien! But it was pretty cool of him to at least stick around this long and explain things. I love how Vance /still/ hasn't bothered to take the knife out, haha.
New characters? Costume hunt? Hype!:D
(Oh, the text is perfectly fine and readable!)
Times like this I feel like Lucien's a sort of personified exposition device mixed in with a mysterious and stoic know-it-all...only, you know, not a total dick about it.
It would be funny if I just kept the knife in the whole time, but something tells me that would be incredibly inconvenient for him.
Could be worse, I guess, in regards to both comments. I know I write a lot sometimes but I didn't want to stretch this over two pages needlessly either.
At least he isn't that guy in Megamind who's weak to copper.
I find his power pretty cool actually. Not many superheroes feel a surge of power after being stabbed. Unless you're Superman, a stab to the gut would most likely hurt.
To power up, he needs to get hurt, or hit someone and gets some energy from the recoils, interesting concept.
When I first saw the page, I thought, whoa a lot of text! But as I read the entire page, I understand it was a good idea to place all the explaination of his power on one page, so a reader doesn't have to flip pages.
To me there felt like a little too much for one page but not enough for two, especially when I already had the page breaks planned out. I had to compromise.
I'm gonna miss Lucien! But it was pretty cool of him to at least stick around this long and explain things. I love how Vance /still/ hasn't bothered to take the knife out, haha.
New characters? Costume hunt? Hype!:D
(Oh, the text is perfectly fine and readable!)
It would be funny if I just kept the knife in the whole time, but something tells me that would be incredibly inconvenient for him.
The text is fine (if a little small).
Great page, overall!
At least he isn't that guy in Megamind who's weak to copper.
When I first saw the page, I thought, whoa a lot of text! But as I read the entire page, I understand it was a good idea to place all the explaination of his power on one page, so a reader doesn't have to flip pages.
Nothing more to say than that XD